A narrative with dialogue

Something happened a couple of weeks ago wich was a real test of my honestly. I was with friends, and we were playing football in a park. There's a house near the park and we broke a glass.

The man of the house appeared.

"Who broke the glass?"He asked. We looked at each other guiltily, then my friend spoke.

"I'm not sure what happened", he said. He wasn't telling the truth.

"One bird hit the glass" I said. I wasn't me who broke it. I wasn't telling the truth.

"Are you sure?" he asked.

My friend Jonny whispered me: "When I said 3 we run away!"

"1...2..3!" Say Jonny, and all of my friend run away.

"Little bastards, come here little bastards, I'm going to call the police, come here little bastards!

It was a funny and amazing experince, but i felt that I hadn't done the right thing.

About an experience

This time last year, tings weren't going too well for me. I'd failed some exams at school. I spent a lot of time in computer. The only thing that make me happy was Rugby.

Everything changed for me the day I saw a book about climbing. The people were going to climbing. We went to Annapurna (Himalaya) and we went to climb the Annapurna, a very tall and big mountain. I found new friends.

These days I feel much happier. Climbing has made me feel more important.

If I hadn't read this book, I'd never had the opportunity.

An Opinion

Should the people spend time watching television or reading books?

In my opinion the people mustn't watch TV more that 2 hours a day. We shouldn't do everything to do sport and read books.

I agree with spending time reading books and do just sport. We shouldn't play computer games and watch rubbish TV

I believe that people should do as they can to play chess and other tabletops games. We should buy more tabletops games. We should ban violent games and other stupid pc games.

In conclusion, it is clear to me that we must play tabletops games, do sport, and read a lot of books. The politicians must ban violent games.

The blue carbuncle

When did Watson visit Holmes? The 27 desember
Was the hat connected with an important crime? yes
Why did Holmes think that the hat was interesting? Because is a very good hat
Who was Peterson? Peterson was a man
Who attacked Henry Baker?
Why did the man carrying the goose run away when he saw Peterson? Because he known Peterson
Peterson knew that the man's name was Henry baker, so why didn't he return the goose and the hat? Because in the gose it were a blue carbuncle.

Sherlock and Conan Doyle

SHERLOCK HOLMES
He is a fictional detective created by Scottish author and physician Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. A brilliant London-based "consulting detective", Holmes is famous for his astute logical reasoning, his ability to take almost any disguise, and his forensic science skills to solve difficult cases.

SIR ARTHUR IGNATIUS CONAN DOYLE
(22 May 1859 - 7 July 1930), he was a Scottish physician and writer, most noted for his sotries about the detective Sherlock Holmes, wich are generally considered a major innovation in the field of crime fiction, and for the adventures of Professor Challenger. He was a prolific writer whose other works include science fiction stories, historical novels, plays and romances, poetry, and non-ficiton.

Oral Presentation

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BAD ORAL!!

McDonald's Corporation (NYSE: MCD) is the world's biggest fast food restaurants

In 1940 the brothers Richard and Maurice McDonald open the first restaurant in USA. But in 1948 they introduce the "Speede Service System" . And then they went famous The original mascot of McDonald's was a man with a chef's hat on top of a hamburger shaped head whose name was "Speede."

The site of the McDonald brothers' original restaurant is now a monument.

McDonald's restaurants are found in 119 countries and territories around the world and serve 58 million customers each day. McDonald's operates over 31,000 restaurants worldwide, employing more than 1.5 million people

McDonald's is one of the most biggest company in the world

McDonald's sells : hamburgers, cheeseburgers, chicken products,French fries, breakfast items, soft drinks, shakes, and desserts.

As example of the rapid globalization of the American fast food industry, McDonald's is often the target of criticism for its menu, its expansion, and its business practices.

One of the most famous legal case is the Coffee case. McDonald's pay 3 million € to a woman who burned herself whit a hot coffee that she bought in a McDonald's shop

EVALUATION

PRESENTATION
-Did you use any resources? Yes, I did.
-Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes, well i think so.

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT
-Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes, I did. But most off the time i loke to the teacher
-Did you red for your notes? No, I didn't.
-Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? Yes, but not many.

STRUCTURE
-Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes, I did.
-Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? No, but I think that my structure was clear.

CONTENT
-Did you introduce interesting new information to your audience? Yes, I think that I explanation a new information.
-Was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original? My information was original but superficial.

LANGUAGE
-Did you check your grammar? Yes, I did.
-Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? No, I didn't.
-Did you use sentence linkers? No, I didn't.
-Did you use fillers? No

PRONUNCIATION
-Did you know how to pronounce all your words? No all word, but some others yes. Example: (Clawn)

-Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classamate or the teacher? Yes, I did.
-Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? I change my tone of voice
-Did you speek in a fluid continum or with breaks and interruptions? I spoke in a fluid continum.

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-Sergi talks about the company Abercrombie & Fitch. I was very surprised that made people queue (cua) to enter the store.

-Miós and Blanca explain us the stroy of Starbucks! It was correct.

-Pau talk about the mobile phone. He showed us how the technology evolves and there are many applications available.

-Tania talk about the Mini. It was a interesting oral and it was good

-Xavier talk about Surf is was a very interesting and a good oral. I think it was the best.

-Eloi talk about Primark. It was a good presentation. He must tu improve the pronunciation

Passive / Active

Today I do a lot of passive exercises.
Here is the link!
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/active_passive/